This is the second essay assigned for us which is a Compare and Contrast Essay between two movie film either romantic comedies or animated films.
I had chosen "Rango" and "Finding Nemo" to compare.
English02 from Teck Wei
Comments from lecturer:
"A fairly well written essay, though I noticed that at one point, you wrote the beginning of your essay as such: "For the movie “Finding Nemo”, it was a movie about an over-protective clownfish named Marlin, searching for his abducted son, Nemo during an attack from their predator with a regal tang named Dory all the way to Sydney Harbor." I foiund a very similar sentence on Wikipedia: It tells the story of the over-protective clownfish named Marlin (Albert Brooks) who, along with a regal tang named Dory (Ellen DeGeneres), searches for his abducted son Nemo (Alexander Gould) all the way to Sydney Harbour. While you can paraphrase, this is very close to plagarism."
Reflection:
For this essay I had watched both of the movies again to find out what is their background, setting, story-line and the characteristics of the characters. Both of them were awesome animated movie films which was my favorite.
Comments from lecturer:
"A fairly well written essay, though I noticed that at one point, you wrote the beginning of your essay as such: "For the movie “Finding Nemo”, it was a movie about an over-protective clownfish named Marlin, searching for his abducted son, Nemo during an attack from their predator with a regal tang named Dory all the way to Sydney Harbor." I foiund a very similar sentence on Wikipedia: It tells the story of the over-protective clownfish named Marlin (Albert Brooks) who, along with a regal tang named Dory (Ellen DeGeneres), searches for his abducted son Nemo (Alexander Gould) all the way to Sydney Harbour. While you can paraphrase, this is very close to plagarism."
Reflection:
For this essay I had watched both of the movies again to find out what is their background, setting, story-line and the characteristics of the characters. Both of them were awesome animated movie films which was my favorite.
Lifelong Learning
Discipline Specific Knowledge
In this essay I had learnt how to locate and choose the correct information that I wanted and insert them into my essay.
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