The tool that i had chosen is the "Cutting Board" which is a cooking utensil often used by cookers. I am required to produce a minimum of one and half A4 page of narrative essay describing the tool I had selected in term of physical appearance, 5 senses and how I feel about it.
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Comments from lecturer.
"It was a fairly interesting essay, but I felt, that, coming from a cooking lover's experience, I think there could have been more interesting elaborations rather than just telling me information on a surface level. It is up to you and your writing to make the ordinary chopping board sound more interesting."
Reflections:
After looking at the comment from my lecturer, I had a strike on my mind finding out what was lacked in my essay. I should fill up my vocabulary with more and more words and also explore deeper into my object to let my essay looks more interesting.
Comments from lecturer.
"It was a fairly interesting essay, but I felt, that, coming from a cooking lover's experience, I think there could have been more interesting elaborations rather than just telling me information on a surface level. It is up to you and your writing to make the ordinary chopping board sound more interesting."
Reflections:
After looking at the comment from my lecturer, I had a strike on my mind finding out what was lacked in my essay. I should fill up my vocabulary with more and more words and also explore deeper into my object to let my essay looks more interesting.
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